our teacher decided to air all the students opening sequence in class so we all can observe and give feedback. we showed them our unfinished product which was the one that I shared in the last blog post but here is the link for it: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nsjuBxzJP5SeULDfpiKAV4gNkI1h0hsF/view?usp=sharing
our teacher and our classmates firstly advised us to put up a voiceover of Zia, speaking which we were already planning on doing so, so that it gets easier for the audience to understand who the character is and what she is going through.
they also advised us to add folley sounds for the scene where she is ringing the doorbell several times to make it feel more real.
they also told us to remove the scene where svea and I are present as Zia's friends as it seemed unrequited and unnecessary.
the also appreciated our music as it was contrasting with our theme and enjoyed watching our opening sequence.
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